Cooper, Insanely accurate timing on the elevator pitch. I like the idea as well as your thoughts about introducing an idea, citing a problem, and addressing how you can fix that problem. The only recommendation I can make in terms of this pitch is to be a little more still and less hand movement. This movement takes away from watching you and hearing what you have to say and redirects the audience to your moving hands.
Hello Cooper, Excellent timing and I also believe that your business idea will have success if you find a celebrity that could introduce you to other possible customers. The only thing I would recommend for future pitches and presentations would be to look more directly into your camara and less hand moving. Besides that, I believe that you did an excellent job.
Hi Cooper, You sound very confident in your idea and your timing is great. I really liked that you took pauses and talked slow; it brought more emphasis to what you were saying. I am a little confused, however, on how you decided to pitch this idea. In the pitch, you seem to focus a lot more on making money on social media rather than managing social media accounts. I would just try to be a little more specific on the intentions of your service.
Hey Mae, Thanks for the feedback. I thought about your point about the focus of my pitch. Though the core concept of my service is to help prevent mistakes by my clients, I believed that focusing on profit would be more likely to be a pitch that would be received by my key demographic. Thank you so much for the feedback, I will definitely focus less on the money, and more on the service itself in the future.
Cooper,
ReplyDeleteInsanely accurate timing on the elevator pitch. I like the idea as well as your thoughts about introducing an idea, citing a problem, and addressing how you can fix that problem. The only recommendation I can make in terms of this pitch is to be a little more still and less hand movement. This movement takes away from watching you and hearing what you have to say and redirects the audience to your moving hands.
Hello Cooper,
ReplyDeleteExcellent timing and I also believe that your business idea will have success if you find a celebrity that could introduce you to other possible customers. The only thing I would recommend for future pitches and presentations would be to look more directly into your camara and less hand moving. Besides that, I believe that you did an excellent job.
Hi Cooper,
ReplyDeleteYou sound very confident in your idea and your timing is great. I really liked that you took pauses and talked slow; it brought more emphasis to what you were saying. I am a little confused, however, on how you decided to pitch this idea. In the pitch, you seem to focus a lot more on making money on social media rather than managing social media accounts. I would just try to be a little more specific on the intentions of your service.
Hey Mae,
DeleteThanks for the feedback. I thought about your point about the focus of my pitch. Though the core concept of my service is to help prevent mistakes by my clients, I believed that focusing on profit would be more likely to be a pitch that would be received by my key demographic. Thank you so much for the feedback, I will definitely focus less on the money, and more on the service itself in the future.