2. I received a lot of good feedback on my first elevator pitch. The suggestion I got the most was to not move my arms around as much. This did not surprise me whatsoever, as I knew that I was moving them too much whilst still filming. The advice that did surprise me was to focus more on the preventative side of athlete social media management rather than the branding side, which was the core idea of the first elevator pitch. I thought all of the feedback I received was helpful, and it all contributed to make my second elevator pitch that much better.
3. I focused less on the branding side of my service, and more about using it to prevent backlash. I also tried to look at the camera more and toned down my arms as to not be distracting from my message.
It's great that you focused on preventing the black-lash instead of the branch side. I noticed that you didn't use as much arm motion as before because it is less distracting and looks more professional because you look less nervous.
ReplyDeleteHello Goetz,
ReplyDeleteI would say that you did an excellent job on talking about that the issue and that it bothers you when old pictures pop up out of the blue on social media. I have had the same issues and I instantly delete these pictures, since lets be honest, they are a little embarrassing. Great job with your arm movements just try in the future to look directly to the camera and sadly you talked a little over a 90 seconds so keep your timing in mind. But overall, great job!